Fleur is a flower with petals in bloom
Licking 'n lapping the stalk of a plume
Lavishing kisses, ever the flirt
She's open 'n hope'n; beg'n for BOOM
"PLEASE, lil' froggie, come be my GROOM!"
Yet, man after man...after man...after man...
Is what he is... a flame quick to fizz
He hears what he wants as they're union'd as one
Rearing his head from which it was laid
He blows as he grows; spewing his worth
Cock'ling with pride; grinning with mirth
Whither'd and small; he looks half the man
She's quick with a flick and a, "call me sometime"
Best not believe she'll lend him the dime
HaHa...she's SASSY!!!
Good Catholic boy that I am, the mister and I only make love when there's love to be made...
Dumper did'ling dog
Chalky drizzle laid in waste
'Nother me won't be
(RATS! Foiled again!!!)
Good LUCK & Happy Haikuing!!
Rafa
Rafa!
ReplyDeletehaha! I love the haiku visual!!
A delightful post again darling. Lucky for you and the mister theirs lots of love to be made ;P
Kisses
CoreyJo
Really like your post.
ReplyDeleteMaking love is okay but
I prefer hot sex.
beautiful poem and great haiku. As for you and Mister it's a good thing love is in abundance or you would be having a lovely relationship with your hand..LOL truth be told you may be a good catholic boy and yet I think there is enough of devilish misbehavior going on as well.
ReplyDelete@CoreyJo:
ReplyDeleteFunny thing about love, the more he gits under my skin, the more I just gotta...well...ya' know...STUFF :D
@Pickleope:
HaHa, I've heard about you and your naked slappy time!! BUT, if making love isn't to the tune of a couple a TOMS scratch'n and crawl'n to see who'll be KING, then you 'n yours ain't doing it right! Come on over to our house and we'll set you... uhmm... straight(?).
...sorry
@Becca:
If man can't love himself, who can he love? That said, the hand, when at its manipulative best, is quite the lover indeedyDO! Oh, and just like Johnny and his golden fiddle...I've played MINE deep in the seat of Satan, himself. Crack'n his devilish grin as the sun did shine where the sun don't shine a'tall. (YUMMY!)
Happy Slappy times--
Rafa :D
Love the poem but "good Catholic boy"? Really? The catholic bit I can believe but I am pretty sure you are more naughty than good
ReplyDeleteJust the way I love you
Rafa: as usual when I read your many-layered offerings, I land somewhere between laughing and crossing myself. Quite frankly, that haiku makes one wonder if you need electro-shock therapy (Carrie Fisher swears by it.) On the other hand, your remarkably spry and naughty ode to me is magnificent--so I wouldn't want anything short-circuiting that irrepressible talent. Your "keeping it classy" quotient is low this week--but the entertainment value is high.
ReplyDeleteFleur:
DeleteFunny thing on my way to 'lectro-shock therapy... docs went to hook me up and found no mind. It's as lost as my virginity... and for that, there's no going back. (RATS!!...it wasn't near as much fun as losing ma cherry!)
Everybody:
It's been a rough few months, but, like spring, hope it is eternal. I may be in and out, don't know for sure. However, thanks to the meddling mister, he's pushed me to put a post together for Haiku Monday. Amazing what a little push'n in the cushion can get a man to do :D (what's that old saying, behind every good man is another good man sport'n a big....uhm, never mind)
Wishing everyone some SMILES--
Rafa
You did it again! I almost broke my jaw gasping and laughing! If you were a horse, Rafa, I'd put all my money on you! :P
ReplyDeleteHugs
Jon
Rafa,
ReplyDeleteWhere have you been? Come play Haiku Monday this week at http://serendipitouswildmoments.wordpress.com/2012/11/13/haiku-monday-rock-edifice/.
Serendipity
My dear....where are you?
ReplyDeleteWe've had some stellar haiku the past month--but we need your insouciance!
I second this motion! ;)
DeleteHugs
Jon
just popping in to say HI and miss you
ReplyDeleteWhere are you my dear? You are sorely (HA!) missed ....
ReplyDeleteI hope all is well with you Rafa.
Peace & love
xxx
Blaze